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Old 09-14-05, 09:54 PM   #78
Barz&Penstripes
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Voted For: Deranged

both verses were dope!

Mystic Chaos your wordplay was vivid and your structure was cool. I feel you kept to the topic and were especially creative about having a revolt and starting an uprise. The dialogue with Satan was shakey though you should of elaborated a lil more if you were going in that direction. The dream sequence ending was ok and comical but at the same time its been done to death. The verse was dope but i give it a 8 overall! Good Job though kid!

Deranged i really liked your verse because of the theme of it. You stood consistent to the gloom and doom aspect of it. It was hell on earth from beginning to ending with no salvation in sight. I feel its ok to not have a happy ending all the time because that is a reality of life. You were also very vivid and your structure was also very good. I give you an overall 9.

This battle was more of direction in storyline for me. Both verses were equally dope in structure and vivid wordplay. Good job emcees!!!
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