listening.....you kinda mess up at the beginning and use the same concept twice lol....

but...as u keep going...you get better with your frees.....which is good....you still seem a lil bit uncomforatable behind the mic....but actually better than most when they first start out....which is also a good sign......you got a pretty good voice...but thatll also become better with time....only thing i really disliked...was u saying motherfucker tons at the end lol.....but other than that...not a bad freestyle....keep workin and youll turn out pretty good man....just keep elevating

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