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Voted For: hotshh!
Hotshh! verse
Look kid
I'll Bitchslap ya medley...cuz Daubs a rapping Deadbeat
Its no wonder Rv sleeps on your ass like Satin Bedsheets
^ hmm opener aight punch coulda been better though IMO
22-4 Now you wanna wrestle me? ......Scrawny Faggot
U'll get "Clothelined" faster than Poor woman with Laundry Baskets
^ it's 23-3 lol...punch aight a lil self-g though (seems like the new thing)
LL aint putting in work...them scared kids aint Thugged Out
Te'll leave ya whole "CampFire'd" ....like Careless Cub Scouts
^ good bar
"Hell hath no fury like a female scorned", I feel dis Whores Rage
But watch as Daubs touchdown without reading the Sports Page
^ 1st line meh 2nd line aight
Now you Surfing in a Lake, I'll put a hurting on this Fake
So stay away from 'Loose Leaf' like you allergic to a Rake
^ rhyme basic...punch aight though
Daub-ya bushy like ya avy Pussy, Sucks cause you Gay
But ass backwards like ya title kid " Fuck-a You, Kay"?
^ Please UK shit played out and i ain't jus saying that personal there though
(uk fucker)(avy WAS bush)
Daubs Verse
Canoue not be a pussy? Doubt it, rowings utterly the meaner..
And its true you cause RV PanIc...
..like throwing cutelry in a freezer!!
^ opener a bit meh not liking the structure
Switching it up...
Il make you squeal and serve you deaf,so hot whispers a shout..
And hotshh! rolls with puss....like throwin popped blisters about!!
^ punch aight the puss/blister things kinda on popped spots = played concept
Bitch is a chick? yep,he hatches punches of a wicked simplicity..
And he's is intouch with his inner child..
..when he snatches kids from the city!!
^ good bar not feelin the struc but punch itself was aight
Hes a pussy, watched a chick flick and he cried from the beggining..
And hot is only talkin vowels when says his eyes are for the women!!
^ don't get the 2nd line much to be honest wasn't feelin this much
hotshh! is a Gangsta man, only rocks gold &'s fucked from the crystal..
Which also explains, the only arse he holds..is the butt of a pistol!!
^ aight bar rhyme was aight
I said this guys hot..RV said shh! try not to inflate his ego anymore..
Or his head may mistakedly hit the roof..
..even when hes sat on the floor!!
^ lol good closer rhyme was coo name play and punch was aight best bar
Overall
Overall the main thing is consistancy...Daubs as much as you my mate and all...Hotshh got this...some bars you dropped weren't as good as Hotshh like the talkin vowels?...Hotshh had some alright bars no-1 had anything that jumped out to me IMO but i know you both are capible of droppin nice text on your good days...
V/Hotshh!
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i'm still tryin to figure out how bein born in another country makes somebody fake.
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