Yep, yo 1st dude: flow good, lyrics good, likin the flow here again however emotion not too great, but keep it up, likin yo style tho
2nd dude: def had a good verse here, likin the lyrics, flow and you had that emotion too
Good Work
RTF to my track -
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=208553
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Its called Let Me Free.....THANKS