Voted For: E-Clipse

iight..

both had gd punches but clipes' were more hard hitting...verse had a better flow and that was due to a gd structure (gd job)...wordplays were decent they were clare and quite entertainin..iight heres a lil break down...


Dude ya like fat kids with armbands, ya still struggle to stay afloat..
Cuz yo, ya skillz cudn’t ‘eat away at a verse’ if they were spit by a goat..


^^that was a nice opner had humor...7/10


U can’t cope! But yo, I’ll give this bitch a treat cuz I’m kind to folk..
I heard he had a taste for ‘soul food’,
…………………………so I’ll shove my foot down his throat..


^^closer was nice too cool wordplay...irony was decent gd gd..8/10



condemed...ya verse was ok but dont get mad whan i say i wasnt feelin somelines 4 example


I'm pickin on cripples, the way I attack ya disability
with punches so fast ya be thinkin thats theres 10 of me


...^^tht woulda been cool if only u ended the secondline well...didnt really really rhyme yo...5/10



only iron mike's packin presses creases in his skirts
spit liquid acid that trangresses, heart beat ceases when it squirts

^^...opner was ok but secondline was a lil too sttched...5/10

Con'll infect ya train of thought to disrupt ya mental vision
then dice ya body into thirds, I'm a master with division

^^...typin ur name in ur verse durin a battle makes it self-glo...but this was okcos u stuffed some gd vocab and it hit quite well...


overall both verses were gd but clipse gets this for being constant with the harder hittin punches and the humorized lines he dropped...


now i tookmy time to explain and honestly vote on this..plz do the same in one of mine thanx!!

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