The Paragraph President
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IP:
you need to show better emotion, your voice stays normal the whole thing almost, you need to get more of a agression. flow aint to bad, slips once n awhile. quality aint to bad could be upped a lil, in your 2nd verse you mumbled way way way to much and the flow was mad off, 2 totally different verses.
anyway not bad.
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