1st dude.....ahh im not real impressed....delivery could be upped...flow could also be upped a lil bit....both are decent....lyrically your aright....some decent multies.....
hook.....its ok...not real real catchy....but...its decent...
2nd dude....coo voice....lyrically he could use some work.....only a couple decent bars....delivery and flow is pretty good....
also both work on rhyme scheme a lil...although in my opinion thats not that big of a factor.....
PLEASE RTF......
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=208403
thanks...itd be appreciated