1st dude.....ahh im not real impressed....delivery could be upped...flow could also be upped a lil bit....both are decent....lyrically your aright....some decent multies.....

hook.....its ok...not real real catchy....but...its decent...


2nd dude....coo voice....lyrically he could use some work.....only a couple decent bars....delivery and flow is pretty good....


also both work on rhyme scheme a lil...although in my opinion thats not that big of a factor.....

PLEASE RTF...... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=208403

thanks...itd be appreciated

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