Voted For: E-Clipse

only iron mike's packin presses creases in his skirts
spit liquid acid that trangresses, heart beat ceases when it squirts
^^^Ight opener
I'm pickin on cripples, the way I attack ya disability
(diss- ability)
with punches so fast ya be thinkin thats theres 10 of me
^^^No...opener was ight then it didnt hit
you really aint no friend to me, lets end this trash bout
treat ya like some 'fliers', when I'm done ya 'passed out'
^^^Weak
Con'll infect ya train of thought to disrupt ya mental vision
then dice ya body into thirds, I'm a master with division
^^^Nice closer

Dude ya like fat kids with armbands, ya still struggle to stay afloat..
Cuz yo, ya skillz cudn’t ‘eat away at a verse’ if they were spit by a goat..
^^^Nice opener
This kids condemned to lose, I didn’t mean to rock ya boat..
And I ain’t talking ‘bout ya avy, but I’ll have u gone in a puff of
smoke..
^^^ight personal nuthin to special
Fuckin joke! Give ya hometown advantage, I’ll hang ya up to choke..
Cuz yea, we in this kid’s ‘neck of the woods’, and I’m ‘pullin’ the rope’..
^^^Good punch
U can’t cope! But yo, I’ll give this bitch a treat cuz I’m kind to folk..
I heard he had a taste for ‘soul food’,
…………………………so I’ll shove my foot down his throat..
^^^Nice closer

V/E-clipse.....this was a onesided battle....con came wit weak punchs that were played some were ight an most were not...ur structure was good but u need to work on wordplay an personals...Clipse u came wit a solid verse wit consistent punchs an personals that hit effectively...V/E-Clipse.....R>T>F.............1

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