Voted For: Yvonne

u wudnt be hotter dan a hoe cake even if u were from d oven
bitch,if u dot wanna Tripple like N count ur steps b4 u stolen
3...meh, this didnt really seem that much of a punch to me, wording was all off to.
my punches make a hole between ur legs to make ut tigh dangle
watch him moan like triny when i knock him off 2 d state of mental
4...better than the previous bar, but then still not really that good.
babies break thru ya ego and make u re-arrange yr shit
its sad u think to be a hero when u just a genuine bitch
4...meh, just a bit of shit talking right here.
listen,even if you called urself god u still wunt get respect
cos nobody herre 2 act dramas,its all about lyrical effect
4...again, more talk talk rather than throwing them punches.

OVERALL: 15/40


Yvonne's at a fork in the road, which way will she choose?
i'd say she'd go right........but she went left just to loose
2...meh, @ this wack shit, i seen herbs use this style before.
i guess you would get a vote.....if the system ever won
but it's wins stuck at 0 sort of like elevationg from Yvonne(Y-Von)
3...meh, played concept and weak punch.
she's from her crib, is that next to a bench and her guitar
i mean come on, your verse described just how whack you are
2...played concept, and the way you tried to call her homeless was wack.
your tung tied, with no spits, i guess she chocked and froze
sorry to break the news..but it's the opposite of dope you compose
3...WOW!!! that was so corny and herb like.

OVERALL: 10/40


weak battle,
both had ass verses really, now either try harder or get better, which ever one of those applies to you......verses need to be more creative and focused on punches, throw in some personals, a bit of wordplay and just get a bit less basic n shit.

V/ - Yvonne

plz RTF in one of my battles, links are in my siggy.

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