i told you what i thought about this already but let me leave some shit again..this was alil step up from your usual drops i see you started takin some of my tips into consideration thats good sooner or later your gonna see a even bigger improvement just keep toyin around wit cha flow try makin it sound more fluid and your tracks should sound alottt better then most cats here....imagine it already does and you still got lil flaws to work on..na'mean just keep strivin na'mean try freestylin on the beat before you start writin to it and choose a flow you wanna go wit first and from there start writin feel me well im out kid Ez 1ne...`

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