your flows too slow for the beat it sounds... rhyme scheme is best ive heard from you.. you still need to learn editing... WOAH theres a section that actually had a dope flow... the hook sucks, it doesnt flow properly.... but this is the best ive heard from u... whos dropping 2nd verse??? he outshined what u did to be honest... seriously u NEED to learn how to edit and mix, because when sum1 with good quality(like second verse on this) and u drop with that heavy as fuck echo or reverb w/e you use, it makes your shit sound extremely fucked up.

delivery is cool, could be better, could be worse.... yea, in all honesty this is the best ive heard from you, but i wouldnt listen to again, too many issues need fixing up on it.... keep at it though