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Old 09-17-05, 03:02 AM   #12
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yo ilistened

your verses where good although the accent makes it a lil hard to understand you but from what i heard it was good, nothing etremely dope but still a good song
i wasnt feeling all the talking fo rthe chorus maybe some talking but not all of that talking

good song, could have tried a lil better to write it becuas eit was a stroy type of song and you where not depending on your hook to keep the audience attention so you have to make your delivery and lyrics real dope, but good song

im getting my new preamp over the weekend maybe so we can finally collab
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