I agree with Franchise, sometimes, you put too many words in one line...That's either delivery or lyrics...u can go back and rewrite it to fit better, or devise a way to flow it to fit better...ur choice


I like ur voice on here...it fits the beat well...and I like the theme of it


I think ur voice is recognizable Inter, but you're young so it'll probably change some...So, I think you should really develop a trademark flow style or technique in how you deliver your lyrics so that you'll remain recognizable...

until then...keep elevatin...ur comin up...jus work on that delivery and/or lyrics in certain lines



not a bad track dawg



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