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Old 09-17-05, 10:50 AM   #16
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Eeerm, I Wasnt Really Feeling It Guys
... Sorry.

Some Good Punches/Wordplay Were Thrown
... But You All Had Such Horrible Structure, Sept Young,
Who Had The Weakest Punches Out Of The Group.

So Ya, Content Was Nice Yes, I Like That
... But You Lost Flow Because The Lines Were Just Way To Long.

Stay Up Though, The Talent Is Oviously There
... Just A Few Kinks Need To Be Worked Out.
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