well............... flow iz........... okay and was actually pretty good, but would be better without the filler words (like in the last line when u said now twice).......... fix your structure and flow will follow........ not a bad piece though...... sorta reminds me of Havoc off of Mobb Deep.......... overall 7/10.......... step it up a little, and there may be a spot for u on TTI........ get 3 wins and tryout.........

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