Voted For: PEI

Big_O

Hey yo PEI this will be the day that you die
crawl up in the corner of you room and just cry
Cause this will be your final good bye.....
^uhm where is the punch? Didn't find it

Theres nothing you can say or do to stop me
Im unbeatable do belive me im the only homie reppin that R.O.C! So dont touch just let me BE!
^uhm the BE thing I guess...self-glorification at top

This ain't even a battle verse in my opinion, you had no decent punch, no personal, no wordplay, nothing but self-glorification and basic lines.

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PEI

just to let you know im gonna win this battle yo
cause my rhymes are hot they'll make you burn slow
^decent wordplay I guess, self-glorificiation

and when my punchlines leadin straight to your dome
will leave your ass twisted you aint ever comin home
^aight bar, basic but still cool

and my one-lines will leave you behind bars
like the one-time lokced up now whos the star
^aight wordplay once again

leave your body with rigomirtis cause you cant support this
lycriyal rhymes so fast your slower than a tourtise
^best bar so far, good wordplay, good punch

big o thats comical just like the tv show
and your skills are like a ghost there hard to see
thats why u need a ghostwriter to try to beat me
so u know that will never touch this flow..........
^aight wordplay, decent punches

Aight battle verse, could use some more complexity but overall decent punches and wordplay. The tortoise line was my favo one...

Vote goes to PEI for the real battle verse...RTF in my Immense battle please...

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