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Old 09-18-05, 05:10 AM   #38
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Voted For: hotshh!

Good Battle

Hotshh! - your verse had really good wordplay. good punches throughout. i liked the campfire line the best. your opener was kinda played though. your closer was basic but still good. that loose leaf line was lame. i woulda liked to see some more personals in this verse but it was still solid. 8/10


Daubs - I was disappointed by your verse. I have seen you come with better verses. Your opener wasnt very good at all. it actually kinda sucked for an opener. the blister line was pretty funny though. you had few decent to good punches. the arse line also made me laugh. but the wordplay in some of them was real basic. overall i would give your verse a 7