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Old 09-18-05, 05:42 AM   #5
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Hey girl, where you been sweetie?!

Nice drop right here, speaking on some real shit yet managing to express it in a sort of poetic way. I'd call it poetic realness because you speak on issues that are still alive today though you write it out in a blunt yet sort of sophisticated way. Vocab is on point, flow is good. Storyline is pure truth, many can relate to this sort of stories, I'm sure of that. Hook is nice too, this would make nice song girl.
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