Liking the beat, sample is real nice, bit too low maybe but still. You improved a lot since last stuff I've seen from you in fact. Flow might be rather basic but you hold it down nicely you know. Lyrics are great, emotion was there but might be worked on bit more. That's the hardest part of it all probably, delivering a song with raw emotion yet keeping focused on flow and shit. But keep doing what you do, I definitely see you getting better and better.

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