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Old 09-18-05, 01:13 PM   #12
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I've Definately Gotta Go Lola On This One.

Drakel, When He First Got Into The 'Kiss The Bottle'
... I Thought He Was Going To Go In A Sertain Direction With It Wich Woulda Been Impressive,
But He Took A Completely Different Root Wich Failed To Meet My Expectations.

Mad Knight, Although Had A Pretty Tite Piece
... It Was Very Off Topic.
Instead Of Building A Story Around 'Locked Mouths',
... You Make A Story And 'Locked Mouths' Was Simply A Minor Detail Within It.
Wich Sucks That You Did That Cuz What You Did Was Dope Just Off Topic.

Lola... Lola Was The Happy Medium Between The Two Others
... She Gave Easier Metaphorical Speach Than Drakel,
Coupled With A Storyline Matching That Of Mad's But On Topic All The Way Through.

Solid Verse Overall.

... Please Return The Favor On Me And Deraged's Battle