Well.This was good.Flow was good for the most part due to the nicely placed internals at points.But regardless,there were a few lines that were stretched out.Maybe some line compression could help you out in the future.Cause i don't see anyone,not even twista or bizzy bone,gettin that many sllyables over a beat.As for the topic,I was lost,just like RB.I thought the metaphor concept may have been too complex and may go above the head of some people.(like me).Cause complexity is a good thing,but not when you over do it.

Overall-7.0

Remember...this is just my opinion.Don't come hating at me please.