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Old 09-18-05, 02:46 PM   #9
Districk
Flyweight
 
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Status-ok.decent spit.flow was ite.some ok multis.that 1st bar tho...his record is 1-1.And you said 1 PLUS 2..which is 3.And..how does 3 relate to his record?So that punch made little sense.And the sink/titanic line is played to death.The best bar in your verse was probably the new-b/pre-writing one.

Texaco-I like the flow in your verse.Stayed constant throughout the whole thing.But ur punches were weak.U had a ton of self glorifing n threats a lot.Like the floppy disk/save life...break legs/stand chance...division/no remainder..<--those are not punches.They are merely threats you are making from your keyboard.And not to mention..you had played lines like the calendar/days up..and snuggle/fabric softners.

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