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1926
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IP:
Eh, The Only Thing It Really Had Was Good Flow.
Cuz You Used That Two Syllabol Multie Scheme Throughout.
But It Lacked Strong Enough Metas
... You Had A Lot Of Chances For Dope Metas And Detailed Emotion,
Beings How You Were Writing About A Woman,
... But You Just Lacked Them And Missed The Opportunities.
Never The Less, Good To See You Back
... I'll Be Watching For A More Polished Piece.
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