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Old 09-19-05, 02:10 AM   #3
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ok, les go, bout to fry this dude that goes by the gay name stan
the only thing thats infinite is how many ways u can be whack man
in this battle, me dissing u, ur wishing that id stop that
remeber, every "moment" u spit wont be a kodak
dude i own u like prostitutes working on the streets
u get off on otha dudes given detailed descriptions of their meats
thinking u all hard but ill turn u into scrap metal
have u turning as far away from rap as heavy metal
dog, u cant hold ur own like parapalegics, ur whack
ur eminem wana be ass cant win, jus face facts
stan, "dear mr. im too good to write my fans", ur fucking whack*
thats thw whole reason i didnt write ur ass back

*quote from the song Stan by eminem

most is whack cuz i had to rush....


i give him a 8.5/10 he had a few punches....n an no structure but he flowed



I set something up with out even callin you out//
thats right , cuz i do what i wanna do so shut ur mouth//
i hope i post this up alot faster than u//
so when u see it , u can take a good look//
and now u got something to write about//
cuz you just read my shit//and u know what im all about//you gotta take the wack ass name out//
cuz i called u out and u didnt even call a timeout//
and i know u got them little pretty pictures//a guy with a gun , next picture should be of u , sitting alone with cum ur nut//we all know y u got cum in ur nuts//
lets blame ur little dick//it missed and shot right at your nuts//if your listening real care full, youll know that im not makin much sense // but fuck it ill beat chu anyways with ur sissy ass defense//...y try//its like taking a bitch and make her moan and cry!!!!!!!!!


7.5/10 didnt really feel ur flow or structure......u ahd a couple of punches.....

NO HATE PLZ RTF MAN
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