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Old 09-19-05, 07:36 AM   #5
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Voted For: King Solo

iight yo heres my opinion..


kingsolo had nice wordplay and his vocabs were ok...structure was cool and that made his verse keep on flowing...even tho the "gay" line is played but u had a decent way of making it slightly different from frequent readings...all lines rhymed well and irony plus personals were entertainin...ur verse at least in difference from ur opponent didnt seem like u were kinna talkin instead u were rappin get me?...

L.I no offence but ur verse was a lil off..i've sen u do better than this bro but u didnt put much effort into this...structure was off same with ur flow..punches were there but didnt hit as hard as kingsolo's..most of ur lines were played too and stillu didnt word them well..another thing that gave u a minus was

KORV? Punchline Champ? dude you have to 'ships really son
i could final your punches to prove their not title material


^^^that didnt rhyme...

you didnt have an applausable wordplay too...and irony was weak...sorry tosay but king got u on this one...


honest votes in one of my battles would be appreciated yo...thanx
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