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Old 09-19-05, 07:47 AM   #19
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besides the fact that the rules said no biting unrestricted gets this mayne...he had better punches even tho they seemed a lil weak tome...structure was better wordplay was much mor decent too...he was focused on making sense and dissin and not twisting words till they sensless like stan...his verse had more flow and i must say compliments u cme up with a more decent verse hence the rush...

stan u need to elevate....take it as u want it bro but its an opinion...your verse woulda been of gd quality if only u didnt over-use those played lines on 'cum' and lil dick and so on...ur verse didnt flow and there was no astonishing punch or wordplay...your verse was more on the basics and this i can understand cos theres always a begining but the structure needs panel-beating...feel me?...your verse seemed more adequate for and audio...sorry yo but keep on tryin you will do better someday....


honest votes in 1 of my battles would be appreciated thanx....

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