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Old 09-19-05, 06:33 PM   #33
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Voted For: Juelz .CeZar.

x.c.c.x breakdown:

this guys "19" hes rhymes are 'blakc and white' mine dazzled him in color
he thinks he's a real 'G' bcuz he got fucked up but caught 'HIV' for 100 dollar
4-10, i dont get it dunn
juel had to go to a 'private' school you need to give ur rhymes some oil and 'fuel'
your rhymes wudnt shine if i gave them jeweles they fucked up your a 'mule'
2-10...huuuuh? @ dat last line
hes on a "tour" hes needs his ass chucking back though the door yes hes a male whore
your rhymes cudnt get into the 'core' of any1 putyour rhymes plus any more you sitlll cuudnt score
2-10...jesus, wat in da fuck u talkin about?

creativity: none
wordplay: so so
flow: nothin serious
multiz: none
punches: garbage
structure: needs work

basically, ya wordplay was crack at some parts but tha whole concept of ya lines made no fuckin sense...WHATSOEVER...so u lose mad points for that

Juelz CeZar breakdown:

U A Drug Addict Heres ur fix jus to get it u'd have gay sex
Cuz like Shakey Club Chemisists,Juelz Droppin The X
5-10, weak coulda been stronger n lame concept
Obsessive Wit Pounds,Perfected,the Rest Is Profound
like Assasinating Earl Simmons j's leavin X In The Ground
5-10...nice i liked both lines
Ur Flows old Get sum New punchlines...jab a Phone
Ima have u lookin up to death like starin..........
.........................at ceiling's of funeral ..........homes
7-10...tight shit but just waaaay too long dunn shorten ya lines

creativity: good
wordplay: good
flow: aight
multiz: so so
punches: on point
structure: needs work


OVERALL: Juelz takes it cause his shit actually made sense, i wasnt lost readin da shit....work on ya concepts n creativity@ x.c.c.x

RTF@ Juelz or ima get this shit removed <---Daubs style ahaaa
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