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Old 09-19-05, 06:53 PM   #3
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Voted For: Mystic Chaos

damn man Mystic came off with a good topical

Barr - your verse was too basic. dont like the structure of it at all. made it seem like a poem. it didnt flow very well because a lot of your lines were uneven. no imagery no nothing. you need to keep practicing so you can elevate more.

Mystic - good verse. very much flow was good. the ending was much better than Barr's. your vocab wasn't the greatest but it worked because i got what you were trying to say and u didnt fill it with words that most people dont even understand. good job.


Mystic wins