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Old 09-19-05, 07:15 PM   #26
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Voted For: Natural killa

MERLINS BREAKDOWN:
fake rappers get on the net,they tend to foget about life behind them
fag forgot he tryna come up on my site, so let me remind him.
4-10...jus an intro so it really dont count
in registration you should of never agreed to the terms and conditions
Not one Rv crew wants you, I guess you've learned your position
4-10...no punch, no nothin
2000 post in a month, this is the result of no life rejections
you need this "flow to "surivive" like introvenous injections
7-10...nice feelin both lines, real creative
naturally killing shit,cause your post makes us all laugh to death
never survive as long as me, like you halfed your breath
5-10...good personal in da first line
your broke, like fogetting "flour" while baking you wont get your "cake up"
you more like dry sex............you simply a fake fuck.
7.5-10...nice concept, both lines were tough
this battle remains one sided, like I cut you in half
Each one of your lines dont hit,like a punch in the dark
4-10...endings didnt connect n punch was lame
My aproach is perfect position like a snipers roof
battle me? you bit of more than you can chew,like he hyped is tooth
5.5-10...this was aight, 1st line was blah tho
you couldnt tie a punch together if you gums were rope
grabbing "faiths" ass, relising to win you need tons of "hope"
7-10...feelin this one, both lines were on point
nigkah dont get me started i read ya verses ,pure boredom
so im'a make you fuckin disapear like the casino forum
4-10...nah that was just a blah attempt
This Pathetic Emcee gets Ripped Conclusively, Incisions Seriously Injures this Opponents Nutrients,
The same Phonetic Ego Ravaged, Continuing Investigation Sees Illness Obliterating his Nucleus’
5-10....nothin serious even tho i guess it was an attempt ta OD on him lol but nice vocab here

OVERALL: u had an aight flow, some of ya punches were stronger than others, i felt like ya finisher was jus a whooole bunch of vocabulary put together ta "look" tough but it wasnt that serious....that fucked u up in tha long run cause da regular verse was potentially fire


NATURAL KILLAS BREAKDOWN:
ya hand's doin the rounds cuz in the text,ysdat/@. can't make a sound
Moves in the industry?,shit,jumpingjacks in the power plants doesn't count
7-10...i found that shit funny, 2nd line was tough
u the one spouce pre-writing shit,n don't deny bitch cuz you ain't hiding shit
only throne/trown i see you sittin on is when the balls bounce from u riding it
7-10...tiiiight wordplay, concept, and meta
he's a soakin faggot,n for him to bust he gotta pay the token,n hack-it
if this fag's fighting see-veer(severe) then he's swingin wit a broken racket
6.5-10...even tho u gave tha meanin it wasnt that effective ta me
the shit u barging in get's dilaped from me with this spit with the carnage
u musta pulled out costumes from the attic to spit that garb.-age(garbage)
8-10...nice concept and set up in both lines
in the forums you hated n u the one pussy I can say I'm glad I neva ate-it
must be judging voices of kittens cuz in this bitch you purr-pet-u-rated
9-10...ahahaha shits hilarious dunn, both lines
i spit my worse like an addict,n still beat ya,ya be goin at it,n they teach ya
this a battle on punches but I ain't hear a piss from you like damaged urthreas
7.5-10...good wordplay, creativity also
u spit off the beat n gettin shit on by the elite,so sit down from the re-seat(reciept)
n the record you have at current's weak,like the level we swimmin knee-deep
6-10...these lines were so-so, liked da concepts tho
u respectable?,no,like mexicans suddenly becomin fashionable ur neva cred-I-bull
you shoulda stuck to top-pickles like crazy gluing the peak on vegetables
8-10...once again nice concept, good hit
teach to stop bein my shadow round the forums after u feel the incideration
pre-written or not,you still gettin whipped up like smarty jones rehabliltation
6-10...tight but not that serious dunn
how's you an expert on makin it when you urself thrown ya cards for gators
the lay-ball(label) you signing with is when you squat down on the ANR for favors
8.5-10...lmaoooo aha humor is alive in ya shit
cruise the boo's cuz you wanted something keyed?,well u chose to lose
so bring your basic rhyme scheme,one sllyable shit,n get votes for it too
7.5-10...feelin that personal, not too strong but liked it
cuz that's what this site's about when they ride you aloud n brag
i told u set it up in EFL n you went n put it here for clout,it's sad
5-10...dun get it, honestly
following me n abusin it n this shit's like rocky vs apollo n you still lose it
only way you winning this bitch is by the herbs you got swallowin ya pubic's
7.5-10...tight personal
bored of ur rhymes,all of em played,shit,it's like someone ignored the times
cuz your idea of keyin this is unlockin the closet where u stored those lines
7-10...personals, personals, personals
told him to squash this beef,but like speakin to air,i saw no reasonin with this
n don't worry ysdat/@...we don't need the dot in the name to see the bitch
10-10....beautiful finish on some honest shit

OVERALL: okay...ya shit was MUCCCCH longer than @'s so in my eyes it wasnt all that fair, but as for creativity?? u nailed it, personals were strong everywhere u used em, punches werent played, flow was on point, and u installed a lil humor in each line...ya ending TOPPED @'s that shit basically took da battle in my eyes


OVERALL VOTE= Natural Killa


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