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Old 09-20-05, 07:08 PM   #14
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Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B

to Tha 1 an onlii B
I know what you B
0...no punch...rhyming same words twice..
you B a pussy loose and bloddy
give it up buddy, You better study
1...no punch...basic shit..
these rhymes that i spit
they always legit and make you wanna commit
2...self glorifing
I aint afraid of what u gotta say
cause im the predator and your my prey
2...self glorifing
now i dont wanna stray to far from the subject
but after this rhyme your gonna be house wrecked
2...borderline self glorifing...but still whack
its not my fault you grew up as a reject
now i gotta peace DISCONNECT
2...whack

yo i seen some of ya shit and itz way too basic
you have tha gayest lines and thatz y you alwayz gittin lit
3...didn't like 2nd line..but at least the 1st line is true..so good personal
wanting to battle me and you must be demonic*
cuz thats jus absurd bitch you must be usin chronic
3..u didn't have to explain wat demonic means..and weak punch
we should all call you tha 1 an onlii b
cuz ur tha 1 an onlii bitch here,not me
2...weak...weak..weak
ur flow is wack and your punches are lame
and u dont suck cuz your new to tha game
1..wtf?..u ain;t diss him..you trying to defend him or sumtin?..that wat this line sound like.
you suck cuz u jus werent ment to rhyme
thats why your gonna lose time after time
3...weak
you start spittin and itz a muderous cryme
makin ppl go deaf from listenin to your shit lines
2...basic shit

WOW..newb battle.
Well..tha 1 and onlii got this.
Big_O..you seriously need work.U were basic as fuck.And u even rhymed the same words twice(1st bar).And most of ur verse wuz self glorifing...elevate mutha fucker.

Vote-! onlii B
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