Coming to Kill you All
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Voted For: §ick§eed
Payn Ain Worth Disses, Since He Bitches...So Much I Mistook Him 4 Misses
Upset Cuz Everyone Dismiss His, "SLAVE TRACS" Like Their SUBMISSIVE!
5....wuzn't feelin this much..esspeccially the 1st line.
Like a Fiend Dis Crack Twitches, Ya Washed Up Raps Should B On Dishes
Father Used Ta Fuck Him "UPON A STAR"...So "PAYN" Was His "WISHES"! (omg think)
6...nice....liked the 1st line more tho..'n it should have been worded better
Killin §eed Ya Cant Do, Who Amped U?? Wears Spongebob On His Ankles
Mama Used Ta Spank U, For Not Standin Up For Yaself Like.....Fat Crews!!
3...these lines are played
Merked Wit No Thank You's, Ur Gay In Your Heart You Really Want Dudes
But You Proved, Ta Da Whole Site U Got Fucked...Whut Laxatives U Use!?
3..gay line?c'mon man...be more orginal
If You In Payn Its Cause §eed Stole Your Reign, Now You Have No Name
Unless You Borrow An "ATHLETES INJURY"...& Call Yaself "PRO-PAYN"!
7....ite...but try to make wordplay match on both sides next time.
havin sex w/ out protection, is tha only time ur considered a Sicc~Seed
cuz ya rhymes r like Infectionz, eva time u spit ya passin out STDS
3...weak...disease shit(unless used creatively)..are a no.
i silence kids like duct tape and violence shit..i'll Wrap~A~Watch~Round~My~Fist
then punch ya eye lids just ta Show~U~What~Time~It~Is
3...no punch..and don't do that swiggly shit
This guy's bitch..it take time ta trip i'll tie is kicks togther..and watch him fall,
as I~Walk~All~Ova~Daub~Lotz.. like i can't find my whip
5...ite
what kind a shit is this, a laugh is all i'll give his ass..and maybe a punch
i ain't say'n wut up when i Extend~My~Fist~Ta~DaP
3...didn't rhyme..no punch
forget the raps, there's no alum-in-um.. and they foil still
You just make Ah-Sea look back like Trash and Oil spills(Aussie)
3....really forced wordplay.
boi you'll feel sick alot but not cause ya tinka drops
after deaths occur is the only time people Digg'n in ya Flower Box
3...weak
Ok..SickSeed got this.
Payn...next time..in battles..don't use that swiggly shit(~).Looks newbish.And learn to make every bar a punchline.U had too many shit that didn't diss.And you also forced wordplay..like that ah-see/aussie one.Learn to overcome forced wordplay
Vote-SickSeed
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