Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B

there is some elevation needed on both sides............. but i'm gonna start ont he good points first........... Tha 1 An Onlii B had a pretty good flow......... better punchlines...........however many lines where played i was feeling the structure and i thought it lack creativity......... i see alot of potential but right now your lines are pretty basic try to incorporate more wordplay...............ryda i like the structure your flow ws better... however no punchlines........... you just kept talking about how great u are this is a battle concentrate on insulting ur oppenet.......... ur verse also lack substance add some wordplay metaphors puns.... whatever it takes ........ like i said i thought this battle was basic Tha 1 An Onlii B gets my vote base on harder hitting punchlines.... no hate just constructive critism take if you like...........PEACE 1

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just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . . or u just gonna make me laff