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Old 09-20-05, 10:52 PM   #9
Paranoid
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*listening as typing*

the beat is really good i suppose speats made it. if he did hes doin good. intermental i think this was alright your flow is sketchy at times, not as good as your other tracks i think, your lyrics were good, nice lil hook to it. overall i think you did alright coulda been better from you, i know you can do better.

can ya rtf on my new track "Pains creativity"

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