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Old 09-21-05, 04:55 PM   #34
flow verse
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Voted For: DaRk ReLiGiOn

lol..................very creative i enjoyed many of the punches but closer was corny and played out.........but i was feeling everything else.............u flowed very well... and almost every line was a punch...........just thought u could have closed it better but u still get my vote
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