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Old 09-21-05, 06:10 PM   #55
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I thought about battlin a herb but who better to choose
no sense in wastin 5 credits if u know that you'll lose
4...weak shit...
Ya rhymes is preschool all patty-cakes and rattles
thimk u gangsta? just coz KIN-Ethic declined ur battle
5...an Ok personal i guess...
losing to this nigga is like losing to a "SUBTLE" fag
i'll treat like gym clothes carried in a duffle bag
3....weak...c'mon.
u supposed to be a flyweight? ha ur just new to da game
why view poll results there aint gonna be 100% by ya name
2...no punch.....self glorifing
my personals are like "dunks" ill posterize this guy
call me "IMAGETITAN" coz u beneath me like a posted reply
6...ok...i haven't heard this before.
Ludacris? nah but my lyrics make u say "oh" like a Ciara music video
after the poll is closed ill still be here "continuing" on this "hoe
4..not much of a punch...

This kid needs help, i told him his vocab need "raisin"
so he got fruity, wrote a verse, and then threw grapes in
6...liked the concept..wit the raisin/raisin...but the 2nd line coulda been something better.
yo ass get layed out, wit gats you sprayed out
like every house party punch, ya shit's kid n' played out
3...wasn't liking this one.
golden shellz's a punk coward, know that he aint beatin me
he like the simpsons, yellow bellied and erased easily...
5...decent punch...
ya style's as dusted as the front lines in IRAQ
like warren sapp, you'll be retired wit two nines to ya back
6...good flowing...shoulda made that dust/FL thingy the punch IMO.
besides the fact that you 'dumb', you cant speak clearly
battles in text but got tha nerve to holla "nobody's hearin me"
5....ok...
but feel renewal, you could shine wit a pound of a jewel....
but rappin wit LIL JOHN wouldn't issue you the sound of approval
(YEAAAAAH!)
4...aaah....i wuzn't likin this..sorry,
im livin tha truth, hittin you goofs, my sound heavy like thunder
assemble ya troops? but like you suspended from math class.... you already "out-numbered"
5....straight punch

OK...decent battle here.
But Docontinue got it IMO.
Tho some lines,like the raisin one,coulda been worded better 'n shit.
Golden Cat...
U had some basic and weak punches.That 5 credit one..now..the problem with that is..it's just another one of 'em "I ain't wasting my time on you" lines.And that's played.Two lines on the polls too.Sounded repitative.Don't use same concepts twice.They were completly different in termz of wat they were saying..but it wuz still ABOUT polls.Get more creative.

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