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Old 09-21-05, 07:49 PM   #5
.:Mike Check:.
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Voted For: Bone Collector

Dude Comeon Be Serious The Reasin You
.................................2-0 Is Cuz U Battle Nice Guys
Thats Easy Like Goin To Beverly Hills And Doin
.................................................. .............drive Bies
^^ight,nice attempt at a punch but wasnt feelin it too much,iight opener

Im A End U Like General In Street Fighters
Cuz Youd Be 0-2 If It Wasnt For Dickriders
^^im feelin the flow and i like tha 2nd line...nice

I Guess The Only Times He Spits First
..........................is When Hes Playing Truth Or Dare
Cuz When He Facs Me He Dosent Even Stare
^^wasnt feelin it too much...kinda creative tho

You Little Pussy Was Scared To Accept
Ur Wack Like When Scobey Goes For Afg Attemp
^^^2nd line stretched a little too much but iw as feelin it...nice

Im Ending You Like N.o Homesthat Happens When You
Face The Bone
^^^i dont understand why thatz there but iight


Yo catch me in the street, poppin that bullshit
Catch a fat lip, hoes all over your shit
^^wouldnt he want to have hoes?..not feelin it...pretty wack opener

My house of reresentatives stay starvin, beats thumpin
You get wyt bytches but ur not the 1 dumping
^^again,not feelin it...played

Im unholy, cause there ain't a part missin
and i catch u in da club on the floor with a heart missin
^^no punch,self glorification,and you rymed missin wit missin

my point is that u a bitch aint no one gone respect ya
nigga not even the real bonecollector would accept ya
^^wack punch,elementary school bar,and once again you rymed tha same words

this your first battle and your rhymes are tiring
your pathetic.......go get a job.....i think dunkin donuts is hiring
^^first line was pretty good,i was feelin it,but that 2nd line killed you with that bar...played out and wack

iight,bonecollecter definatley got this one...tha notorious d,i see that u are elevated from b4,but keep at it and i respect that your battlin again...NO HATE!!!

v/bonecollecter
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