Thread: Eazy-E vs Shazz
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Old 09-21-05, 08:09 PM   #11
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Voted For: Shazz

This fool saeled his fate cause he has no talent
Ur usless like a knight wit no gallent
^^not feelin it,bad flow in this bar,bad opener,wack

I got verses and punches that crush u lik a truck
This nigga got 1 option on this battle that get fucked
^^PLAYED OUT!!!...wack

Ur lyrics are like toxic waste they stink up the air
This nigga must be blind cause his rythme sux ....or just lyric inpaired
^^dawg,tha lyrically impaired shit is played out now,and your stretchin linez to much

This battle is done and u should declare me the winner
U betta make room in ur rec for cause a L comin wit ya
^^no punch,self glorification kinda,wack

Ur a dumb ass cause u challangin me is a KO requested
And don't try the played Eazy-E jokes cause I'm gonna....Except it
^^wack as fuck,bad closer...no punch

you seriously need better vocab and punches and work on ya flow and structure...no hate tho...jus keep at it and elevate


Look at this fake eazy-e, soon to be 0-3
He wanting to spit first cause he afriad of me
^^nice opener,i like tha flow,i was feelin it,nice multie

Him goin 2nd would be a choke like eminem in 8mile
Im beating you so bad just like deleting a file
^^not feelin tha second line but an iight punch

You won't even spit im wasting my own time
Can't even spit right, what? forgot how to rhyme
^^again,nice flow but not really feelin it,nice attempt at a punch

Takin shazz out is a task this kid will never complete
because with flow that bad how do you expect to compete
^^pretty good closer,iight punches and nice self glorification mixed in wit it

^^you definatley had tha better verse,jus up ya vocab a little bit and git a couple harder punches but u dont need alot of elevation like him

no hate to either...keep at it homiez...nice job
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