2 b honest wit ya it'z ight but needs alot of touchin up on tha real mayne...but i feel where u comin from wit it tho i like da 3 verses but i tell ur jus beginning diz rhyming & rapping thang & if u need help wit dat holla at me i'll b happy 2 work wit ya 2 step u up on ya lyrical game

3/10 ...cuz ur structure was bad..lines were stretched..u need 2 elevate in ur wording..need sum meta's..needs imagery, & base of a concept..no hatin jus keepin it real

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