Thread: Eazy-E vs Shazz
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Old 09-21-05, 09:55 PM   #12
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Voted For: Shazz

Look at this fake eazy-e, soon to be 0-3
He wanting to spit first cause he afriad of me
^dont matta who spit first weak punch 0/10^
Him goin 2nd would be a choke like eminem in 8mile
Im beating you so bad just like deleting a file
^no........no punch whack 0/10^
You won't even spit im wasting my own time
Can't even spit right, what? forgot how to rhyme
^no......no punch nothing 0/10^
Takin shazz out is a task this kid will never complete
because with flow that bad how do you expect to compete
^only really decent punch 4/10^
Overall:I feel that your verse lacked any real complexity, it was basic and not to any point...i feel you need to up on your punches and personals over all...try aiming your verse at your opponent and make it effect him...overall 4/10


This fool saeled his fate cause he has no talent
Ur usless like a knight wit no gallent
^No, bad wordplay and bad flow 0/10^
I got verses and punches that crush u lik a truck
This nigga got 1 option on this battle that get fucked
^no punch....very soft spoken 0/10^
Ur lyrics are like toxic waste they stink up the air
This nigga must be blind cause his rythme sux ....or just lyric inpaired
^Wouldnt matta if he's blind, he could still flow..0/10^
This battle is done and u should declare me the winner
U betta make room in ur rec for cause a L comin wit ya
^played line, no punch really....0/10^
Ur a dumb ass cause u challangin me is a KO requested
And don't try the played Eazy-E jokes cause I'm gonna....Except it
^weak way to end ur verse....now punch 0/10^
Overall:I think that your verse was lyrically soft, and contained no punches throughout it all...u need to up on vocab wordplay punches personals etc. got ways to go overall in this battle you had 0/10...wasnt feelin it....

v/shazz

overall: this battle was weak...u needa come harder........

rtf shazz......please 1
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