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Old 09-21-05, 10:10 PM   #42
Shazz
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Mystic-
Your verse was pretty dope felt ya imagery and ya emotion...got to the point good story line...structure was iight...good vocab overall i was feelin ya verse....6/10

Barr-
Your verse lacked imagery and emotion i dont think it was set up and structured well at all, i feel yo uneed to up on some things....over all i think ur new to the topical world and overall 4/10.....


AND WHY THE FUCK CAN"T I VOTE
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