The beat reminds me of a song by Common. So the beat is dope and shit, but you sound like you're half asleep and just reading off a piece of paper. The lyrics are pretty good. For your hook, you should of had two different voices.

Voice 1: Is it really pain?

Voice 2: Of course it is man.

Word, all in all, not a bad track. I'd say re-record it and touch up how you sound when you're spitting. It just sounds really choppy.

Keep dropping them..