wow @ your ego... structure was wack, lines way too long.. vocab was average.. multies lacked, rhyme scheme was basic.. and gun talk is played, you are an e-thug.. please, next time u try tell sum1 they suck at audio... atleast make sure ur average atleast in text.... back in my RM days when i owned in text and was classed as one of the best at open mic... so yea, keep practicing