yea im listenin to this Im feelin the beat and shit, but you not flowing that well on it, I think that you ya lyrics could be better too. However, you is trying to send a good message, I'll give you that, but overall Im not really feelin the track, how it is real soft at one point and all the sudden the beat drops back and then randomly gets quiet again. Dont get me wrong Im feelin the beat, but its just sorta awkward and I dont think that the heartbeat and the singin at the end was mixed well, but stay up tho, not bad, just need a lil improvement. 1
Can you leave some feedback on this RTF please
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209344