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Old 09-22-05, 07:24 PM   #11
Dickard.
A Life Of Chryme
 
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Voted For: Ryda

ok, ur verse was bad...im not hating just stating a fact

for you to elevate you need to learn how to structurize
honestly look at your opponent structurize like that .....it will be more easy to flow with and rhyme with....over all u had simple plain little punches that overall amounted more than ur opponent so due to line ammount ill vote you...but up on those things

and cash money..u needa come harder make ur punches presentable

and if u have anyproblems...ill battle u both in text

and im a topical head
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