Voted For: Daemon

XxHavocxX

Welcome to Rapverse, here comes the meat,
Fresh off the hook and bought off the street.
3.. would have sounded decent on audio, not a punchline though..
Newbie is here, the Green one arrives,
But these kind of rhymes can change your whole lives.
0.. this has nothing to do with the battle..
So let's see what you got, Daemon, let's see what you spin,
Cycle of poetry, from beginning to end.
0.. who cares?.. you need to toss in some punches every once in a while..

Overall - 3

Daemon

John, we'll live in the same house and be together forever, my sister,
And I pop your donkey more then I pop my plastic pistol, oh yeah.
0.. complete garbage..
Flow bad, I know your dad, we talked on the phone I was like 'you bad'
And he's like, that's not true, I've got snacks, I'm teh mofuckin' nomad!
1.. at least in the first line you attempted a punch.. even though it sucked..
I'm sorry, but your poems suck, and no one wants to be like you...
I set up a punching booth man, so genius can finally strike you.
4.. not that creative, but at least its a punch, and an attempt at wit..

Overall - 5

Vote - Daemon