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Old 09-23-05, 02:09 PM   #18
Stanza
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Voted For: ILL-noise

Aii This is what I think

Ill

Your lines are more complex and a Little more original than Daemonz lines are ........Your punchez are on tact and your personals are on Q and True .........as far as your flow goes you need to work on yo structure but the flow was aii so that prolly why ya structure was fucked up bcuz yo flow was on most of the time they will not always meet hand and hand...
I think that you deserve this win in this battle and I think that you should also try and mix you some multies in yo verses sometimes if you ask me .....but yeah you get my vote in this battle

Daemon
You had a aii verse but tne i think that you tried to hard to hit in spots that werent that important....but then you also had some nice personals but your wording kinda threw it off when you try to deep dive into the wordingz its like your forcing yourself and it threw your style off which threw your verse off and which contributed to you losing this battle.

I dont think that you deserve this win

So my vote goes to Ill-Noise

Please RTF in the battle link in my sig in 48 hrs or this vote will get removed
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