Voted For: HiPnoTiK

This cat cant play fair, he's a breaker of the rules
D/R'S notorious d, cuz he cant get fair votes hes afraid to loose
4...ok....
Askin me ta drop a quick key, too see if u can beat me
Underestimating my rhymes, you aint the onlii 1 b
3....self glorifing...no dissing watsoeva in this bar
Rhymes to far fetched your alias is batman
Voted for urself,and still lost man thats y u got banned
4....u ain't playing off it..ur just stating it.
Ya self needs elevatin, your full of played rhymes
Filled wit cheesy vocab, and lack of punch lines
5....ur best bar so far
Stop ya cheatin, and play nice you lil bitch
Smash ya backwards thassarap, thats it
4....weak...and why bring up the cheating thing again?

u thought u could take me and cashmoney at tha same time?
bitch you couldnt even beat a pre-schooler wit them rymez
3...played,basic....
hypnosis wouldnt even help you win against me
i'd still beat you with tha quickest of quick keys*
3..ok..so he said he wanted to quick jey against you?How does that relate to this punch watsoeva?It's not a play.U saying u'll beat him witout trying is wat this bar is saying.Has nothing to do with wat he said.
lets git it poppin so you can expierience your loss son
this battle is like omarion(him) goin up againt big pun(me)
2....basic concept...and omarion is not a rapper..and big pun is dead.So if your big pun...then you are dead?BAD WORDING.
you set it fo a 30 minute drop cuz you want a quick loss
you aint gittin head cuz there aint no salad to toss
2...head lines are played.
my rymez are demonic and jus straight insane
im catch fire quick cuz im flammable like propane
1...self glorifing bar here.

OK..this battle wuz pretty weak in my opinion.Both of you had your problems.But I gotta go with hypnotik.
Tha 1...
U had played concepts.Like that pre-shooler one.And that pun/omarion one..made no sence.Why you u say he's omarion and ur pun?WE know it's not true.Cuz why would omarion be here rappin when he sings and PUn is dead.If you kept the (him)/(me) thingy out of the bar..then it would have been all right.And that last bar..self glorifing.Don't do that.

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