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IP:
Eeeh, I Liked The Message In Which You Were Trying To Convay Here.
But I Just Think You Came Up Kind Of Short In Ability.
While This Piece Did Have Some Nice Emotion,
It Lacked The Metaphoricle Tongue To Really Mark Its Identity As Poem.
But What I Liked About This Was Its Realism.
It's Lack Of Anything False And 'Just For The Reader' Content.
It Seemed As If All Was Being True To A Raw Emotion.
So, Personally Im Kinda Torn On This Piece.
Im Not Sure If I Liked It Not Because It Lacked Alot But Had Alot I Liked,
Just A Complete Toss Up For Me.
Sorry I Couldnt Be More Helpfull This One Has Just Stumped Me.
But Maybe Next Time Strive For Some More Detailed/Metaphorical Speach,
And Tack On A Few More Stanza's Aswell Because This Was Slightly Brief.
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