this was a good concept to the story, i liked it a lot you had good vocab and also it made u think in some parts of the verse also how its kinda happen for real and life good verse keep droppin

fav part
But that's only the outside view, my insides are laughing,
cackling, feeling no remourse, the emotion-I was lacking.
His blood is inundated on my hands, and it feels good,
Silver god chains on my wrist-and I'd can do it again
....If I could.

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